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Those that dare are sold off by the kingdom to Gaius Aureaus, the both hated and respected proprietor.

Those that dare are sold off by the kingdom to Gaius Aureus, the both hated and respected proprietor.


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Trade: The fishing industry in the subsurface ocean feeds the Helot population while the sprawling agro-colonies on the surface raise crops and livestock for export; arms forges produce a limited surplus of military goods for off-world buyers; primary imports include: helium-3, hydrogen, raw materials and technology.

Trade: The fishing industry in the subsurface ocean feeds the Helot population while the sprawling agro-colonies on the surface raise crops and livestock for export; arms forges produce a limited surplus of military goods for off-world buyers; primary imports include: helium-3, hydrogen, raw materials, and technology.

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The moon is the seat of power for Anaxilus IX, King and host of the Grand Assembly.

The moon is the seat of power for Anaxilus IX, King, and host of the Grand Assembly.


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The capitol and spaceport, Olympia is located in towering ridges of Phrygia on the equator.

The capital and spaceport, Olympia is located in towering ridges of Phrygia on the equator.


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Government: Kingdom of Jove; a military governor appointed by the Grand Assembly to a ten year term.

Government: Kingdom of Jove; a military governor appointed by the Grand Assembly to a ten-year term.


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As those projects neared completion, an attempt to terraform Callisto was initiated, but abandoned as tensions increased through the system and the Great Solar War seemed eminent.

As those projects neared completion, an attempt to terraform Callisto was initiated but abandoned as tensions increased through the system and the Great Solar War seemed imminent.


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The rugged surface is punctuated by looming spires of ice over hundred meters tall.

The rugged surface is punctuated by looming spires of ice over a hundred meters tall.


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The ice moon’s capitol lies at the center of the 360-kilometer diameter Valhalla Crater; a collection of domes huddled together against the frigid dark.

The ice moon’s capital lies at the center of the 360-kilometer diameter Valhalla Crater; a collection of domes huddled together against the frigid dark.


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In October of 3646, during what has become know as the Callisto Affair, an orbital relay station was compromised by a strike team sent by the corsair prince, Kaulder Djinn.

In October of 3646, during what has become known as the Callisto Affair, an orbital relay station was compromised by a strike team sent by the corsair prince, Kaulder Djinn.


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Government: Kingdom of Jove; a general appointed by the Grand Assembly to a five year term commands each star forts; one from each of the major Jovian worlds.

Government: Kingdom of Jove; a general appointed by the Grand Assembly to a five-year term commands each star forts; one from each of the major Jovian worlds.


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Many such businesses are run by off-worlders who are issued a ten year license by the Ministry of Defense allowing them to operate and provide necessary services to the fort’s personnel.

Many such businesses are run by off-worlders who are issued a ten-year license by the Ministry of Defense allowing them to operate and provide necessary services to the fort’s personnel.


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The side away from Jupiter is considered the forward facing.

The side away from Jupiter is considered the forward-facing.


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Four of the star forts hangars each contain six heavy starfighters; two of the hangars each contain a guncutter and two assault boats; one contains three corvettes; and the last hanger is reserved for other traffic coming and going from the star fort.

Four of the star forts hangars each contain six heavy starfighters; two of the hangars each contain a guncutter and two assault boats; one contains three corvettes, and the last hanger is reserved for other traffic coming and going from the star fort.

 


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@von-fuge, fixed, thx.

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@von-fuge, appreciate all of the edits. Any feedback on the general layout and level of content for the Kingdom of Jove? Once finalized, it will serve as a template of sorts for the remainder of the systems in the chapter.

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