Chapter 5: The Outland - Organizations & Kingdom of Jove
Ripper Gauntlet d10: Damage Fortitude +d8; ROF FA; Cap 30; Range 20x4; Recoil; Unreliable
Should have AP 3; see v1.0 pg 80 Ripper Gauntlet
I like the visual layout and find it very readable. I think you hit the important points as far as what to include (local day, gravity, trade, etc.)
Should Density be a rating instead of a calculation? For example, Olympia has a population density of 4,135/km2; is that a densely-packed throng or a barely populated ghost town?
@von-fuge, good catches; fixed.
Fair point on population density. I prefer the hard data style of the planetary profiles (Tech and Law an unavoidable exception), so I am going to stick with the numbers, but we need to figure out how to make it relatable at a glance. Please read the Celestial Data sidebar on page 81 and share your thoughts... What I have there now isn't getting it done regarding density and is a bit misleading... You'd look at my examples and think Megalopolis was thinly populated which in untrue. It falls squarely between Tokyo (6,349) and NYC (10,175). I think we need ranges or better examples...
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