I am getting about 700 words per page with the current two-column format. The story should be five to seven pages long or 3500 to 7000 words.
As a rough guide, refer to the events in the Chronicle of a World at War Chapter V and VI. There is not much time for world building, but I have attached a chapter from the novel I was working on to give you a feel for the theme. It is heavy on world-building, being Chapter One, and I only include it as a reference to the feel of the Forever War. Try to get to the action directly. I leave the scope and span to you, but we want to have these rules elements when we move on to the mirrored Extended Example of Play:
- Initiative; including drawing weapons; Free Action v. Move Action
- Ranged combat; including range and cover
- Melee combat
- Tactical use of Talents
- Tactical use of Advanced Actions
- Tactical movement
- Skill use
- Conditions inflicted by damage; devastated, etc.
- Resisted secondary effects & effect damage
- Use of magic
Ultimately it needs to be a cool story, so all of this is merely a guideline.
Peace & Happy Hunting!
Scribe of the Adventure System
In the event it is not obvious, you can't use the same level of "colorful" language I use in the draft. It needs to be PG-13 maybe... Although, I like to think of the gypsy as TV-MA for sure...
Scribe of the Adventure System